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My hobby is listening to music. Firstly, Listening to music is not only help me relax but also provide me with musical knowledge. Secondly, it makes me relax after a hard-working day. Thirdly, listening to music is a form of entertainment that helps keep my mind comfortable. It also helps my broaden my English vocabulary and learning words I don’t know. Finally, All of them is a very important piece of my life. I think they help my soul more plentiful and more love of life. Do you think so?